Thursday, 26 September 2013

i chose you. chapter13 *FINALE*

Me: ee?
: good! you didn't change your number.
me: emm who's this?
: it's ahmad, remember?
me: not really?
ahmad: LA, khalid, Starbucks, doesn't ring a bill?
me: ooh that ahmad.. umm what do you want?
ahmad*sighing* i called you to talk about khalid.
hearing his name....
me: about?
ahamd: he have been really sick this past three months, he doesn't go out, he doesn't eat, he is miserable, and it's all because of you, are you happy of that?
happy? i'm miserable too!
me: ahmad.. how did you know this?
ahmad: well, as you know i'm not that close with him but his friends are worried about him and they told me about the 'girl' who turned his world upside down and i knew it was you.. so i took your number from his phone without him knowing and called you...
my eyes teared up: a-hmad what do you want me to do ya3ni? he doesn't want me in his life anymore!
ahmad: he does! you're the one who ruin it!
me; wow so you're calling me just to make me feel bad more than i feel?*sarcastically*
ahmad: no, i'm calling you because i want you to talk to him, at least that may make him better, so would you?
me: i don't know..... how can i do that?
ahmad: it's easy, just follow my steps.
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i walked back and forth in the empty living room, HIS living room! i still can't believe i agreed on coming here ugh, ahmad said that his parents are traveling.
Khalid:h-hanouf?
yagalb hanouf:') he looked really broken my heart ached at the thoughts of what i did, i missed this handsome face, i missed his laugh, i missed his voice. i missed talking to him.
i went closer and smiled: ee hanouf
khalid: wsh jabk hina?
me: umm because i missed you?
he stared at me: ween s3ud 3nik?
me: fkena el5i6ba.
he stared at me, again! what's with the no emotions face? i'm really getting worried now.
me: what's wrong, why aren't you happy?..
khalid finally removed his eyes from mine and said: i'm, but it's too late.
me: w-what do you mean?
khalid: it means that i'm moving on just like you did hanouf.. my mother talked to me about this girl and-
me: are you kidding me? i still love you khalid! i freaking love you*tearing* and you're saying that you'll marry another girl?
khalid: i'm sorry hanouf...
me: khalid please tell me you're not serious?*crying*
he just looked at me emotionlessly, is this even khalid? i don't remember him being careless like this!
i just walked out of his house as fast as i could, isn't it embarrassing? i came all the way for him and this is what i get..
i went back home and layed on my bed, this reminds me of the last time i saw him, it's like i'm living the same day again and again. i guess i will better after a while, i wish.
2 weeks passed and nothing really changed, expect that i became dumb, not feeling anything at all, in the past there was hope of me and khalid being together, but now??

moving on, i just ate lunch and was about to sleep when my mom came by my room and sat on my bed.
that same weird look, laykun eli bbali?
my mom: 7abebti t3rfein en benik o bein saud makan fe n9eib o mfrou9' takmleen 7yatik 9a7?
me: 9a7?
just like i thought.
my mom*smiling* jayenk 56ab, o ana s2alt 3nhum o mashallah 5oush nas!
me: bs mama ana mabi atzawaj!
my mom: laish 7abebti? 9adgeni a7san lik o shft elwalad ba3ad mazyoun*winking*
i laughed: mama mo 3an kitha, bs madri...
my mom: 6yb ana b5aleik tfakreen*getting up* magltlik 3an esmah?
like i care.
i just looked at her and she continued: khalid alx.
khalid alx
khalid alx
khalid alx
am i dreaming?
me*staring at her* mt2kda khalid alx?
my mom*laughing* ee haw shfeek mu m9adgaa?
me*smiling* la bs kitha, 6yb mama bfakir o a7akeik.
she left me, but i'm still not believing that! o m g!
five days passed, i told my mom about my decision eni mwagfa, lol like i thought about itttt!
i'm just too happy.
she talked to them about 'alshoufa' and they told her that it's going to be tomorrow, i called sara and she was as shocked as i was, she promised that she's not going to leave me tomorrow, galbi.<3
- skipping one day-
i never felt nervous like this, sara tried calming me down but it didn't work that much, my mother called me, slamt 3ala oma o jlast, then my mother called me to go to the other living room and that's when i became nervous all again, ugh.
i got in and sat, not removing my eye off the ground, i don't remember ever being that shy!
khalid: hanoufa
me: hmm?
khalid*laughing* shda3wa 3ad 6al3eni!
me*smiling* magdar..
he sat next to me and held my hand: laish ma tgdreen?
me: it's too good to be true , i don't want to look at you then this may be a dream
khalid*smiling* you're too cute tdrein?
i looked at him and smiled: adri
khalid: that's the hanouf i know*laughing* i missed this smile.
me: i missed yours too! but what about that girl?*laughing*
khalid*smiling* that girl is the one i'm looking at right now, the one i love so much, the one who's going to be the mother of my children's, and that girl, is the most prettiest girl in my eyes, you know her right?
me*smiling* right, i love you khalid.
khalid: i love you so much more*kissing my hands*
i looked at our hands and smiled, ot fits perfectly together, and when i looked up at him he leaned to kiss me, i closed my eyes but we were interrupted by sara's screaming. i jumped from my place and she laughed: ashufkum bzyada ma54ein ra7tkum?
i blushed again and khalid smiled: i couldn't resist it.
-current day:-

"babe" i said through the phone.
"hmm?" khalid replied.
"you should sleep" it was around 4:00am and we're still talking.
khalid: "but i still didn't get enough from you"
as always i blushed and replied "you will when we get married"
"three months left? i can't wait!" he whined.
"you can just like how you waited before, yalla goodnight!"
"hanouf!" Khalid said quickly.
"3yuna?"
"i love you." he never forgot,  every time we end the call it will end by Khalid saying'i love you' and me replying:
"much more"
i'm just too lucky. but that didn't come easily, or did it?


so sadly this is the end, and i'm really going to miss writing this story!:( thank you so much guys for your feedbacks it really meant a lot! i hope you liked it and please don't forget to comment!xx
Goodbyes for now.<3

19 comments:

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  8. PERFECTTTT:'( !!!!!!
    Keep going <3

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  9. Awww :(♥♥♥

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  10. AMAZINGG i acutually teared lol 3ad lat6wlen 3laina b anther storyy

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  12. PERFEEECT!! Bs g9er o m3 ke4a a54na jw :'(♥

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  14. First of all, IN UR FACE EVERYONE. Second, love love love love love LOVE ur blog and i really wish that u could write another story soon xx -21

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  15. Keeepppp goooiinnngg hannouuuf!!!

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  16. Amaazingg storyyyy!!! You're a good writer!!!

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  17. Amaazingg storyyyy:( keeep goninggggg<33!!

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  18. Mashallah you r an amazing writer !!!! Just finished ur stories never got bored !

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  19. Amaaaz-beeaans! I love it. and Khalid tbh.. Allah yrzgna basss

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